Your Paradise Too

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It started as a feeling -
 A feeling of beauty in everything around,
 A feeling of fluttering butterflies in the stomach,
 A feeling of sweet pain and longing in the heart.

And grew into a hope -
 A hope of togetherness,
 A hope of lifetime and eternity,
 A hope of sharing our lives with all its bliss and tears.

The hope took the form of -
 A silent prayer on the lips,
 A quite word to confess the love,
 A gentle touch to cause ripples in the heart.

And now suddenly, there is one wish in my eyes -
 I just wanna spend my life with you
And I know for sure 
 It will be your paradise too.

Comments

  1. Expressions of Heart4 November 2012 at 18:58

    Nice start :) All d best for BLOGGING more n more....

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  2. Everything & Nothing5 November 2012 at 07:36

    thank u so much Kriti.. hope to do so :-)

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  3. Expressions of Heart7 December 2012 at 06:50

    Hi, I am Kriti, author of blog Expressions of Heart and I hereby Nominate your blog for THE LIEBSTER BLOG AWARD. For more details kindly refer to Liebster Blog Award at http://kriationkriti.blogspot.in/2012/12/liebster-blog-award.html

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  4. sowmita19 December 2012 at 08:16

    Great work rashmi....the latent poet has metamorphosed finally!

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  5. Neha3 January 2013 at 09:32

    Wow... love it !

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  6. Unknown3 January 2013 at 09:48

    This one z d most beautiful 1.....touching!!

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    1. Everything & Nothing3 January 2013 at 09:50

      thank u :-) love is a beautiful feeling so anything about it becomes beautiful

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