What to write ?
Is the question on my mind
About what to speak ?
Is being discussed between my lips
"You are confused" -
Speaks my mind
"Take your time" -
My Heart chimes
The pen is irked,
For it has not a paper marked
Pages lie lifeless,
With not being turned
Oh !! C'mmon -
Motivates my friend
Pick up the mighty pair,
And it will all be fair.
"Let the words soothingly Flow" -
Asserts my friend in a haste
"Easy to say, Than to do" -
I thunder back in dismay.
Just when I am out of all hope,
And can see no silver line to cope
I notice - "Oh Wow, What a luck !
I've pulled a cord earlier not struck."
The piece looks pretty decent,
Evolved into a funny chat.
"Great !" says my friend,
"Now you've donned a comic hat."
Nice one! Interestingly we all bloggers come through this stage..but you actually used it for creating a nice piece of writing! Kudos!!
ReplyDeletehahaha :-) thanks kriti for the appreciation..
ReplyDeletewas so confused on the subject matter dat my confusion became my subject
hmmm....Interesting and sounds different and fresh....:-) !!!! Cheers!!!!
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dream on :-P
ReplyDelete" "Easy to say, Than to do" - I thunder back in dismay" I can picture you quite well... Really good,, keep writing
ReplyDeletenow that u've said it, can't stop laughing picturing it myself :-D
Deletethank u apurv sir :-)
Liked it rashmi...would love to see carmelites studying it in their books fr xms smday ;-)
ReplyDeleteWOW !!
Deletethats a wonderful compliment. thank u dear :-)
keep heeding to my advice you will end up creating masterpieces :P
ReplyDeletewell, what should i say here !!
Deleteyes, u r the friend i am referring to in this piece.. but bas haan... baaki credit mera :-P
Wow great Rajan!!!
ReplyDeletethank u hai sunny ji :-)
Deletemastt hai na :-)
Awesome work!!! Very creative!!!
ReplyDelete:-) yayyyyyyy :-)
Deleteghar pe bata dena - u got inspired
yeah sure... :P
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Delete5th para does not rhyme!! :P
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